Script Idea

Since we're only working on the intro sequence for our neo-noir, the script does not call for that much to be said, especially since we'll be cutting up a lot of silent action in the editing.

Our primary interest, script-wise will the be the brief introductory narration, presented in a sort of 'pause' in the fast-paced action of the sequence.

Since I'm co-writing the script, here's an idea for our narrative:

EXT. OPEN FIELD. DAY

NATHAN runs towards the camera, stopping close. He looks deadpan in to the lens.

NATHAN

I know what you're thinking.

"What's this silly wanker gone and done?"

Truth is, I haven't got a clue what's going on.

But, it's all downhill from here.

NATHAN looks over his shoulder, seeing his pursuers and looks back in to the camera.

NATHAN

Oh, shit.

Fade to black.